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Ghost [2nd Edition]

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Ghost [2nd edition]

Hushed voices in twilight
Outside air lies still
Night sky almost starless
Something, someone moved
Living eyes wander
Suddenly mover, gone.  
This edition was the brainstorm of haiku poet Delice1941. It should read better.
© 2014 - 2024 MichelxPuabi
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D-A-Skelly's avatar
Michel was pleased to help you edit  poem - hope you feel satisfied with result. It is definately minimalist now:rose: